I love you too

Deep in the throes of intimacy, he whispered in my ear, “I love you.”

The words trickled through my canal

Passing by my eyes

Temporarily blurring my vision

Making their way down my spine and into my lungs

They stirred quiet chaos

Ceasing my ability to breathe for a second

My heart jumped from its place in my chest

Taken aback with the flood of emotion

Only we existed in that brief moment

Then the reverberations of his words gently faded away

Much like the recess of a lazy tide

My eyes adjusted

The world slowly came back into focus

While my breath returned

Just in time to whisper back, “I love you, too.”


About samlobos

I am an avid fan of creating narratives in my head about random experiences and quotes for future books I will probably not write. I harbor a 15 year old girl in my psyche and like to solve world issues when I'm half asleep. View all posts by samlobos

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